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Lighting the darkness
Out of the light and into the realism,
Vocalizing the way this wind whispers against these lips
Igniting the energy resting idle in nimble finger tips
Netting is so simplistic
Given the right, and precise tools, it may mold the perfect history

History, how much the past compensates with and for
In time, the present is un-wrapped and,
Mailed to a time where we're all-

Marked and branded like a select breed of cattle. .
Annexed and secluded,
Knitting wool memories so that love
Elapses into something warm and fuzzy!
Stitches look so ugly, when compared to things crocheted.

Mild, timid, sensitive,
You have shown all these attributes to the little child inside of me.

Here, in this room, everything is utterly emptied.
Every poem and story of purgatory
Agony, so silent, I can feel the skeleton within this body-
Ripping through the
Tendons showing me that the purity of clarity can truly affect me.

BEAT FAST
It doesn't really do him justice, but..I love him, and I wish I could express just how much.
No matter how short the time may be between you or I, I'll give you everything, no need to ever ask things of me, for I will do them willingly.
I love you baby..

Random side note! : I do not own the picture above, it belongs to it's rightful owner 100% whoever that may be!
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SilverKaname Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It can be hard to fully express our love for another. I know, because I have the same problem sometimes. Or when I think I've got something it is never good enough lol.
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
I know, it's as if nothing you could ever say or do, would be enough. It drives me crazy, my logical mind can't function because of it. lol.
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SilverKaname Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah it's real hard sometimes lol
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Frencifry Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
ohmegosh, you've turned acrostics into pure genius!..i ove it :D
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Aw, thank you so much! That really does mean so much!
"Genius" ... I don't think I deserve that much! o:
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Frencifry Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
ahas, in my eyes you do(:
i remember acrostic poems being something "fun and silly" to do in elementary school xD
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Lol, I remember them too now! xD
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Frencifry Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
haha, right? xD
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
I just noticed how many errors I made in this poem..:iconbleedrainbowplz:
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Frencifry Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Student Writer
there were errors?..i didn' see any..
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