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Crying
All alone
Remembering
Regretting
Yesterday's memories

Maybe
Even

Before
Enough
Forensics appear,
Over the-
Radio, you and-
Everyone could like to hear a tale,

I'll speak lightly.

Trailing your lovely lust
River crushing my throat
In time
People will see the uselessness in me-

And think,
Never did I see her dying."
Did you even-

Bring back my sinking body?
Regretful
Envy.
Anonymous
Killing sprees

I beg of you to carry me before I trip and break, because this is all it would take…
This poem is meant to have several meaning, it really does suck, but it's a very general poem that is meant to be taken into different views. It's all over the place, I know, but it wouldn't be logically correct if it werent.
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Frencifry Jan 7, 2012  Student Writer
that's the beauty of it all though!!..complex meanings, almost impossible to pinpoint just one(: 'tis an awesome poem(:
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you so much!
I really love hearing you inspiring feedback. c:
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Frencifry Jan 7, 2012  Student Writer
haha, you are very much welcome(:
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I can feel the messages. Very deep for me
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you so much...Sometimes, my "messages" get tangled between one another and it's hard for others to make out or understand..
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
You just keep expressing yourself the way you know how. We write to get it all out, not to impress anybody.
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:iconxanimeangel88x:
beautifully written
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you so much, it means a lot to hear that you think that! (:
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you so much...It truly means a lot to me. (:
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:iconxanimeangel88x:
no problem :) always a pleasure
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