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If I close my eyes tight,
I can see a make-shift light.
Tucking me in,
Saying: "Ask forgiveness for your sins."

Then again,
There's your hand,
Tugging my body,
So I can stand.

I screamed at you,
My voice smashed down without a sound,
And how did you react?
You said "I love you" right back.

My cheeks are wet,
But I bet-
You'd make me smile,
Erasing the tears all the while.

I need you,
I can't laugh,
I would not enjoy anything,
If you were not a part of my "everything."

I pray everyday,
That you're okay,
And that I'll always be allowed to say,
"Please stay…"
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It's perfect :) I can relate lol
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
I'm so very glad! You're far too sweet!
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It's all the candy I eat lol jk
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
LOL <33 xD
I apologize for my very, very, veryyy belated responses! o:
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JnAsBy123 Nov 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Love your artwork. I hope I can become good like you. I also love your stories.
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Aw, thank you so much! You are good- Great, actually! ^^
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JnAsBy123 Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome and thanks. ☺
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Bryce1350 Nov 9, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing.
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Really? :iconawwwplz:
Thank you so much..
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