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Forget any form of love!
Under the stare of God, I swore to you,
Count the memories with your eyes.
Killing my fragile skin was such a sin.

Into the darkness,
Together, by me, we'll make it through.

Alas, roses wilt and twist to dust,
Lonely as the petals flit and crust,
Laughing, their free and no longer used-
              To prompt lust
sdjkfjskdfj sd I don't even care how shitty this is.
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Again, NOT SHITTY! It's kind of funny in a fucked up way, this is exactly how I felt when my husband tried to leave me a couple of weeks ago. We are back together now but yeah this would perfectly describe how I felt. Good job :)
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Thank you so, so, so much! I'm so sorry to hear he tried to leave you, he would have lost the best thing he'd ever had if did leave. Shows how intelligent men can be sometimes lol. Then again, women have their moments often enough too. :iconbummy1:
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
yes, lol yes we do
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byronicAnomaly Nov 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Love this. Its so you....in...a...good way? Complement I swear :)
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Aw, thank you sweetie. It could be a lot better though..
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byronicAnomaly Nov 20, 2011  Student General Artist
we all can become "better" but things that are raw come off more beautifully in my humble op.
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byronicAnomaly Nov 20, 2011  Student General Artist
<3 quite welcome. geez I never get sick of that icon :D
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