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The mirror,
Shows all of,
These worthless
Tears!

The razor-
Is full of previous and
Past fears I have yet
To watch disappear.

They rub and smear,
I witness,
All the sneers and hold fast
Maybe the looks won't last?

Talking fast,
Why can't I find the words?
I want to write with blood,
Would I be shunned?

I hate,
The constant worry,
My world has gone blurry.
Everyone is rushing past in such a hurry.

It wasn't you,
It was this,
Messed of version
Of what I was supposed to be!

I can't make you happy-
Yet you love me.
If I bleed,
Will you cry over little worthless, me?

The screams will carry,
This body far from,
It's useless dream,
Please-

Forgive me.
Hate myself so much I could die. :iconimdeadplz:
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Don't hate yourself :(
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
I'll try not to deary..:iconhardplz: Okay....Mad random icon...
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
It's hard I battle with it too but you gotta try to love yourself sometimes too. It makes life a little easier. And nice icon lol
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:iconczardeathshead:
Do not hate yourself. What you have written here takes talent. Talent that should not be exterminated by a blade or whatever else. Live to be happy. Do what you enjoy no matter what others might say. Take it from me. A Bisexual, Liberal, sometimes Socialist, amateur writer, living within the Bible Belt (one of the most Ultra-Conservative, red neck populated places on the earth), ignore the assholes that look at you with sneers. If you are happy, you have triumphed over them all.

Much love and prayer to you,
myself.
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you very dearly. This is much appericated. I'll remember this sir. I don't have much talent, but thank you so very much.
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:iconczardeathshead:
It was my pleasure, good lady, to help. And I must insist. You do have talent. Far more than you give yourself credit for.
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Why, thank you very much! That really means so much to me. :icondragontailfaster:
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