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I'm bleeding, but some how you can't see.
Tumbling, stumbling, crying.
Though you no longer care or want to see.
Thought this was how it was meant to be.
You and Me.
A lie.
That's what this was.
A lie.
That was you and I.
yeupp..Old..
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LadyxXxBug Feb 6, 2012
Painful lies...
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Retrubutionist777 Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this packs one powerful punch! Its filled with so much emotion. Brilliant, wonderful work!
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
Thank you so much!
That made me smile. c:
Oh, and I read your work, I'm going to comment on it momentarily!
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Retrubutionist777 Feb 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! I'm so happy it did:) And thank you, I appreciate it so much!
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
My pleasure deary! c:
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Retrubutionist777 Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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Retrubutionist777 Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I love that one!
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
LOL, Mee tooo! :iconboobtouchplz: <-- hehee c:
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