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I'm worthless,
She's priceless.

Her smile was enchanting,
My attitude is merely irritating.

She held beauty,
My skin shows agony.

Her finger was glazed in gold,
Her body was not so naked, that her tears froze.

It is hard to believe,
You could love what's left in me.

I shall try and stop comparing,
Everything we were never sharing.

I hope to keep on hearing,
You're constant praising.

"I love you"
A future I see with you.

A feeling I cannot ignore.
So I implore,
"You are all I need and more."
A lot of editing, but- I just wanted to get it out of my system..I guess..Idek..
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
again...FLASHBACKS!! lol I really know how you feel...
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I'm so sorry you know the feeling...
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SilverKaname Nov 21, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
me too lol...
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Retrubutionist777 Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! So much depth and beauty in it:) Did you draw the picture yourself?
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No, if I had I'd be pretty proud. xD

Aw, thank you so much! That means so much to me, really! <33 c:
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Retrubutionist777 Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: You're very welcome!
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
I love you newest works. o:
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Retrubutionist777 Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very, very much!
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:icondesire-is-never-fair:
My pleasure! As always, their lovely and stunning! ^^
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Retrubutionist777 Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Awww,:blush:, thank you! :tighthug:
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